I got my site up! Instead of The Psypearl Vally, which was in my head, but decided to change it to The Twilight Valley. I know, It dosen't have very many pages but it's a start. Leave a comment?

The Twilight Valley awaits~

Good job for a first try. n_n However, it looks a little awkward with "PsyPearl" in the address and "The Twilight Valley" on the header. I personally think PsyPearl sounds cooler, but it's up to you... if you left it as PsyPearl, you could use a Spoink as a mascot maybe. :D

Lessee, content... I'd advise adding a guestbook if you can. You really don't need game reviews, especially sugar-coated "10/10!" "9/10!" ones... we've all played the games before. Also, as a tip, don't use SubCategories... you have to click on "the games~" to get to the D/P page, and then click the D/P page to get to the RSE page. Instead of doing that, why not just put a link to each page on the menu for easier access?

And your sprites... I'd put some sort of disclaimer up top, so people know not to steal them (or if they want to use them, they can) and perhaps categorize them into "Pokemorphs" "Mixes" "Edits" and the like, for easier navigation. :3

...You know it's still possible to make good avatars in Paint? Instead of just uing a full-color background and pasting a sprite on there, use a background with a border maybe and a pattern, or a background from Google. You can animate without a program, too: use Iaza.com to do that and to add effects. It'd be neat if you had the Arceus avatar flashing through all the different formes. :D

...I like critting, don't mind me. xD Keep up the good work, I look forward to seeing progress you make on your site.

Wow thanks! Hmmm... I'll change it back to PsyPearl. It had a good ring to it. I can't add a guestbook. I don't have the progam for it and I can't download anything.

First of all, I love the site's name. ^^ Very creative, and a lot more refreshing than the "(pokemon)'s (location)" names that are common. [[I'm not being hypocritical, mine has an adjective too! *shot* xDD;;]] The layout looks nice, too. =3 The colors match and it overall looks very neat.

A couple of spelling things on the menu: it's "characters" and not "charactars", and it's "affiliates" instead of "afflates".

I'd fix the Games pages like Zephyr said, and put links to all of them instead of having subpages. It's a lot easier to navigate; what if someone came to your site looking for RSE/FRLG reviews, and only saw one for DP? Also, when you're writing your content, try to add more information and reasons to support your opinion. That will make your pages stronger.

Overall, keep on working on your site, and be sure to be open to new ways of doing things and advice. =) I look forward to watching your site improve!